What do you think of my poem?

I think it is a great poem! Although, i would change the second line in the last stanza to "My skin can feel your hand" so it rhymes with command. I really like the last line, it kind of summerizes it in a poetic way. I would put a semi-colon after kiss too too. Anyways, that is just my input. I really like the poem: the metaphor of the metranome, everything :) Keep it up :D